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Re: Question for the Girls Here
For me, it's if he speaks the same 'language' as I do. Like, what he seems to be interested in. If stands around talking wrestling, I probably wouldn't be interested ...
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Re: Iris
Wow. I really liked this. It expresses...I don't know. There's something really important about eyes. I like to look at people's eye color when the light hits it just right ...
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Re: Shocked: a suspense/mystery
I wrote this a while back, it was my first post..but it's finished. I'm reposting it in chapter sections since nobody really wants to read all twenty nine pages at ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: Addicted to Venom
Okay. First off, I want to say: congratulations. You've written something that matters. I've written poetry before, but it didn't feel like the poetry I am writing now. You're written ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: 'You're my reason,' a love song with three different parts
Thanks for the feedback! I could use some work.
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: Playing with Light
Wow! These are in such good clarity... I love the flower lamp one. A question I have: did you want viewers to be able to identify the lime green, round, ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: The Five Furies: "problem kids" in a group home
I came up with the idea for this in the car...I hope you enjoy it. This is just the first piece. I will write more as soon as I can. ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: a futuristicaly themed computerized drawing
I did this on microsoft paint. Feedback is welcomed.
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Vox Nihili's Reviews
You: post a link to your story (one at a time people, one at a time) and give me time to review it. When I have done so, I'll let ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: Aunty Pop's Kentucky Fried Critiques
I have part 2 of something I think you already read the first part to. A Bird In Katie's Head: here's the link. Thanks, --Vox
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: I Hate Emoticons
Yeah. They can be annoying, but also useful in expressing emotions. I guess that's why they're called emoticons, huh?
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: Delightful Sinner (Death Metal)
I must admit, I didn't read the entire thing...but it honestly rhymes too much... Not to mention some of the rhymes sounded corny, and not all of the lyrics made ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: Forgotten- Chapter 1
Everybody else has said what I want to say...but wow. I love this one. So cool, so good. ;) Cheers. --Voxina
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: Suicide
Awesome! Very dramatic. I loved it. Execept...what are gaffes? That part I don't get, but it was a really intense...and it made sense. The last rhyme was sort of awkward, ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: A Bird In Katie's Head:part two
Part two of A Bird In Katie's Head. *PS: I know what I'm writing about, just wait and see what it turns into! ............. With a back-pack full of paper, ...
Jan 13, 2009
